Monday, January 25, 2016

Round Robin

The tall man exited the house on the hill, and moved toward the boy in the dying light. 


Matt froze. In two impossibly long steps, the tall man was at the window. He lit a cigarette.

The tall man looked over at Matt. He put out his cigarette and pulled out a bazooka. 


The tall man set the bazooka down, looked at Matt again, and spun it in place. "Pucker up."










The rocket missed and decimated a nearby vacant building that had been on the market for years. The owners received a flood of insurance money and were able to pay off all their debts.




Aidan: The first thing that comes to my mind about this assignment is its organizational difficulty. It would be simple enough if it were done all at once and in person. However, for our group at least, the virtual element became problematic. Whether from technical difficulty, or the kind of miscommunications that occur in virtual conversation, we experienced confusion. In my case, this was creatively restricting because I spent more time stressing over communicative errors than thinking about artistry or collaboration. As far as the work that was done, I found it to be challenging because there is no sense of control. However, it does prompt one to be more economical in the use of language. I found that to be a valuable experience in making less words mean more.  

Tabitha: We’ve repeated frequently that creativity loves constraint, and in these short story exercises, I’ve found that to be the case. There’s something really challenging and yet freeing about having to communicate plot, character, theme, and ambience in 20 words, ten words, six words. It’s intriguing to build off other's ideas in both written and visual form, and actually reminded me of group writing for films or television shows. However, in this particular assignment, the communication and technicalities tripped our group up a bit. In Totems without Taboos:The Exquisite Corpse, DJ Spooky speaks of breaking down “the linear flow of ideas between people.” The at-times confusing form of this assignment made it a bit hard to do that, and it sometimes seemed as if we were creating an unwieldy, passive Frankenstein, a painfully self-aware and pointless monster, instead of the one that haunts Mary Shelley’s novel purposefully. It’s an elegant art form, however, the very short story, and feels like a language of its own. To learn it feels essential, but the path to doing so can be hard to navigate.

Trevor: These story sequences were exercises in entropy both in the interpretation of them and organization to do them. Writing and compiling the stories became a weird mission of preservation. There was an odd weight of lineage and legacy to respecting the last story and passing on something understandable and inspirational for the next while trying to write something decent. It’s an odd way to play the surrealist game DJ Spooky told us about, turning the Exquisite Corpse into a preservationist exercise. A truer playing would have veered into the irreverence of something like Axe Cop’s childish, self-contradictory bliss nightmare.

Camden: This telephone-esque exercise was a fine example of how the style of a story can develop a momentum even if the various chapters of the tale are written blindly by different authors. As readers, we can easily discern the familiar components of our favorite genres.  As writers in a group, we perceived distinctive story components and were able to incorporate those components into whatever chapter we contributed. It's almost compulsive. We don't want to write something that goes against the established theme or tone. As a testament to this, some aspect of the original tone was preserved within each mini-series written by our group.

Barrett: Throughout the entire assignment, I was most fascinated by the way my story seemed to evolve. It made me realize that whether or not we intend to apply the “Exquisite Corpse” idea to our art and our stories, historically, it is bound to happen anyway. Do not all stories and ideas become embellished and drawn out over time? The organization of this assignment was inevitably a disaster. Not in the ideal sense, perhaps, but in the realistic carrying out of it. I’m still not sure if it was all done correctly at this point. But I tend to believe that is part of the process and certainly part of the art. Confusion is only compounded into the spontaneity of our responses. In fact, disastrous collaboration is often what spawns cherished art. The somewhat humorous example of the ruined Ecce Homo fresco in Spain comes to mind. It developed from ancient art to bizarre reconstruction attempt to template for memes. This assignment allowed us to just taste that process and be aware of doing so.

Tuesday, January 19, 2016

Music Mosaic: Subterraneans, David Bowie


 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qh-jDMuzuIE

            In her essay Seeing, Annie Dillard speaks of sacrificing details for a greater picture, or sense of truth. In this assignment, I attempted to make minor abstractions form a whole.

The piece I chose is called Subterraneans, and was composed by David Bowie in 1977. It is part of an album called Low. The name is a nod to Bowie’s mental state, however it is a rather lighthearted description of the truth. Rather than a mundane sort of sadness or ennui, he was caught in existential torment. After spending the greater part of a decade addicted to cocaine, courting a damagingly obsessive relationship to celebrity, and devolving into paranoid isolation while living in California, the man sought a change of pace. Low is dramatically different than his previous music, and reflects astounding emotional depths.

One of its songs, Warszawa, was written specifically to reflect the desolation of its Polish namesake. Subterraneans feels similar to that song. There is a sense of profound damage in both, though this sense is more immediate in Warszawa. It strikes the listener as memory in Subterraneans. It does not sound like the death of a culture, but like a memory or half-forgotten story of something long dead. The pain felt in this song is cold, not visceral, and even attains a level of ethereal beauty. The synthesizer portions were densely layered in production, in such a way that the melody sounds indirect. It is reminiscent of hearing a song being played from a distant room in a large house. Some of the instruments were recorded backward, furthering the song’s sense of weightlessness. Low deals explicitly in the theme of societal collapse, and Subterraneans seems to be growing backwards where most songs press forward.

With these thoughts in mind, I chose to include some sort of visual abstraction in each photograph I used. Some images are seen through water or reflected off of it. Some are deliberately freed of context. The final picture is simply a light effect I created in my room. I took some of these pictures at the Bonneville Salt Flats. The Salt Flats are beautiful and barren. There was once life there, and now the earth is literally salted. The flats act as a natural monument to a prehistoric lake. They became linked to Subterraneans in my mind. Both speak beautifully of something that came before, and now is lost. As Bowie’s song seems to slip backward, my images slip to increasing darkness and confusion. It is my hope that together these abstractions are reborn as something understandable.